Post by MyMyMy♥KyKaiKye on Apr 8, 2011 1:25:35 GMT -5
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Driving down the heavy traffic on Peach Tree St., Kaileah finds herself constantly glancing over at Brandon who's on his phone. His fingers rapidly moving, the clicking of the keys on his Blackberry annoyed her to pieces. How could he be so cavalier during a time like this? She was destroyed. The earth and the universe was removed from her in that car, in that moment, she was furious.
"I can't believe you," Kaileah mumbled under her breath, shaking her head to Brandon, still occupied by the Blackberry screen. "I'm about to go through with this and you're sitting there BBM'ing. I resent you so much right now." she said between clenched teeth allowing a tear to escape.
"See this is why its hard to deal with you. You made this decision- NOT ME!" Brandon said finally looking up from his Blackberry screen, shouting at the top of his lungs in the small car. "I cannot WAIT for all of this to be over with, that way, I can be DONE with you." Brandon said finally before returning to his escapades on the device.
"Well, who ever she is, I hope she's worth it and doesn't end up getting the Brandon Royal Abortion Service like me!" Choked up and distracted by Brandon, partially blinded by the pools of liquid in her eyes, Kaileah kept a steady pace through an empty lane at the current intersection.
"I Hate you" she groggily mumbled, blinking releasing more, larger, drops of tears from her eyes. Horns blaring in the background, Brandon sharply looked up from his phone and braced himself.
"YO! WATCH OUT!!" Brandon yelled from the passenger seat, lunging over and grabbing the steering wheel. Without any reaction or reflex, she drove right through the light and into the intersecting traffic.
"KAIL!" Brandon yelled out to a mute, limp and distant Kaileah. In that very instant their vehicle was at fault for being hit 3 times. Once on the passengers rear and twice on the drivers side.
Blinded by the imploded air bags and the turbulence of the impact of the accident, the car being hit vigorously several times and then flipping over, spinning into a nearby brush, Brandon smelled the stench of blood and gas. His life instantly began to flash before his eyes as he weaved in and out of consciousness.
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